Week 10: My second draft

I showed my second draft to my tutor because my first one which submitted last week was too far from a proper essay style. But this time, I tried to write 2100 words.
The contents are about what king of organizations support global SMEs and barrier to the other countries. The structure is an introduction, 4 issues, 1 case study and conclusion.
Through writing this essay, I found interested in these things. The UK is seemed to have many supports to SMEs both government and other organizations. However, almost all sources say that small fashion companies are very hard to get financial supports because of the uncertain business character.  I will research same thing for my country during Christmas holiday because it will help my future.

Useful report:

Neri, K. (2008)The UK Designer Fashion Economy Value relationships – identifying barriers and creating opportunities for business growth [Online]

Available at: http://www.nesta.org.uk/library/documents/UK-Designer-Fashion-Economy.pdf